N.E Creative writing

 Creative Writing

Use this story starter and let your imagination run wild.  Remember we have been working on using similes and metaphors.  I would love to see these used!!

 “Hmmm. Where shall we go this time?” Jeremy asked his brother.

“How about there!?” replied Max excitedly. “We’ve always talked about going there!”

The brothers both put their fingers on the part of the world they had chosen, and waited for the magic to happen.

“I wonder if it will be as fun as our last trip,” mused Jeremy, as the globe began to glow…  

The globe started to spin and flash then it stopped and went black, then they began to shrink fastly and they got pulled into the place they chose “Woah” said Jeremy as they began to slide down a icy mountain once they are at the bottom they put on their gloves and zipped up their jackets and put on a warm beanie.

“It's like a winter wonderland” says Max “we’re in antarctica!” replies Jeremy.

They go on a walk and come across an injured penguin with a fishing hook stuck in its back they get it to stop from running away and Jeremy takes out a pain numbing injector from his backpack he injects the penguin in the back and they slowly remove the hook.

 After the hook is out they give the penguin a fish it then leads them to a shape of ice it looks like a slide, the penguin goes up the slide and slides on its belly down “that looks fun!” says Max.

 They decide to slide down with the penguin then suddenly thousands of penguins emerge from the cold foggy mist “that must be their family” says Jeremy the penguins wave their flipper.

 As they leave they then go home with the globe that was in Max's backpack and go home “what an adventure!” Max and Jeremy cheer